review Bringing Home Danny Five in a Bed Book #1
Ere was explanations on all the men and how they entered the relationship Although Mitch and Antonio portion was way to brief There was some relationship buildingBy half way I was wondering were the sex wasBy 34 of the way I was ready to screamSOMEONE SUCK A DCK ALREADYRight before I read the first real sex scene I was outside complaining to my sister on the phoneHow is there 5 men in a bed and NO SEXI hear a ittle comment from nearbybecause there s no womenWell DUH if there were women I wouldn t be reading itThere is sex It just takes a The Laughing Hangman (Nicholas Bracewell, long time to get thereSoSex rant overThe story was good Iiked their relationshipsThere was a Stiff Upper Lip, Jeeves (Jeeves, lot of spanking To much spanking Itost something due to the abundanceBut overall I enjoyed the story This was such a different read from what I anticipated It was better If your On the Plains looking for just sex BDSM or romance you wont find that here This novel has the elements of the whole story how these five men came together to build a special family of their own You will feel the trials and tribulations real people have in dailyife occurrences The sex and discipline is one fabulous aspect to this family The raw emotions and thoughts of each character are a huge factor as well I cant wait for book two What is this stuff Shit you sure Sock-Yarn Shawls look hoteaning up against the wall with your red ass sticking out Says one DD sub to another Just after we ve heard that the sub who d been belted has fallen asleep against the said wall with a thumb in his mouth Oh by the way the same sub aged 18 is called ittle boy by one of his domsIt ooks to me this stuff has been written to titillate rather than tell an interesting DD story I have nothing against titillating stories it s just hard for me to accept mixing DD with so obvious titillation And I m not interested in age playMore importantly the DD here borders on abuse is abuse in a couple of places during the first two chapters for example Mitch shakes Danny I sure wouldn t place myself in Mitch s hands The trust Drayken Reborn (Dragon Hero, level would be close to zeroSo this most definitely is not for me I won t even give this the name Domestic Discipline It just made me miss a certain Keaton Another example of my pet peeve This authorike so may others thinks that guys wearing their shoes and socks to bed is normal behavior She even calls them naked when they ve removed all other clothing but are still obviously socked and shod At no time during this way too The Cursed Dragon Armor (Dragon Hero, long book does she ever mention them coming off during a disrobing process This is always a good tell tale sign to me about how conscious the author is about her own writing If I m envisioning the scene in specific detail than she is it s time for me to stop reading Is she envisioning the scene she s writing about at all If so does she envision the characters removing their pants and underwear over their shoes and socks when getting naked Or does she envision all her characters going around barefoot all the time so there s no need to ever mention removing footwear If she s unconscious about these obvious details what else is sheeaving out I rantEven though this book is only 350 pages it feels much Stalker longer I was reading the same thing over and over whether it was the same situation repeated with different characters involved or a conflicting argument where each character had a point of view that they kept repeating ad nauseam with nothing moving the scene forward When Danny s mother arrives they keep saying the same things to one another over and over but nothing gets resolved No character gains a clearer understanding of another and we don t even get to find out if the police ever show up Whatever happened Mitch and Antonio do a total about face and become entirely accepting of harboring a juvenile in their home without permission to do soTwo stars because of the hot final sex scene between the five of them which was indeed steamy Now if only there had been of that along the way this would have all been easier to bear I m still wondering however what it feelsike to have five bodies in a king sized bed along with ten shoes Ahhh I wanted to El mundo contemporneo: Del siglo XIX al XXI (Pensamiento) love this book so much It has some of my favorite erotic romancem m ingredients such as m nage polyamorous mm dom discipline and a youngost heroI was so disappointed when the story ended where it did Then there s the fact how bad they messed up with Danny And of course the fact of how much they spanked him rather than reach out to him He s North American Spies like an adopted child rather than an eual partner There s plenty moments where I hated how they didn t notice his downfall The way they brought Ricky into their relationship without thinking of Danny irked me Antonio and Micah treated the other two so differently I didn t feel no connection to them and didn tike them muchI will however read another one of what I think is going to be a series. Ensitivity shines when he pours his heart out through his instruments Ricky comes to the family after being rescued from an abusive relationship As he regains his strength the men help him to build confidence in himself and others He is a delicate soul with to offer than he realizes Danny the baby of the family and insecure about being the youngest fights the Che Guevara limits and control the older men put in place for his care and protection Damaged by neglect and carrying childhood wounds of abuse he has the most to gain from the men as he struggles to fit in and find his place among them Danny slowly heals through theirove and as he Fire Blood (A Targaryen History, learns and grows theyearn and grow with him Book 1 Bringing Home Danny flashes back to the day TJ found Danny alone at party He was a young man 21st Century Corporate Citizenship living precariously on his own until TJ brought him home A critical crossroads is reached weeks before Danny’s 18th birthday Wanting desperately to be seen as a man and to be part of their intimate relationship he is unable to bear being around them Danny flees the security of their home to try and make it on his owneaving the men to come to terms about their feelings for him and to make a decision about their future Will they bring Danny home for go.
E pretty simplistic Mitch and Antonio the oldest two the base couple and the Daddies of the relationship are in control The junior members of the relationship TJ Ricky and Danny are both treated and are written De Koersk - De dodelijke reis van een kernonderzeeër like children and it s their job to obey And get spanked aot And despite their varied backgrounds personalities and various histories of physical and sexual abuse everyone goes along with this At a big picture Sweet Bags level my biggest problem with the story is that it s not well written It s all tell with veryittle show giving you very England in America, 1580-1652 little chance to fall into the story You neverose track of the fact that you re reading The dialogue is stilted without enough differentiation between characters it just doesn t read naturally There was a Battle Scars: A Story of War and All That Follows lot of POV jumping The story is also unnecessarily convoluted flashbacks within flashbacks within flashbacks until by the end I was noonger sure of the progression of events On a personal The Economics Of Business Enterprise level I was really bothered by aot of the relationship dynamics Mitch and Antonio don t really have clear guidelines about what they expect from their subs Any and all objection or resistance to their orders is regarded as disrespectful with no room for discussion or compromise and has one result corporal punishment Even without the histories of some of the characters it reads as one sided and bordering on if not crossing the Comparative Contract Law, Second Edition line of abuse This is complicated for me by the fact that TJ Ricky and Danny are written very much as juvenilechildren which I don t find at all hotsexy I m not saying that ageplay can t be hot or sexy or done well but even when not as part of sex or sexual expression the three kids are written in a way that makes them seem childike and immature As a result the relationship doesn t seem Breakfast with Anglo like a meeting of euals it doesn t seemike TJ Ricky and Danny have any real agency in this supposedly One Big Damn Puzzler lovingnurturing relationship I also didn t feelike Mitch and Antonio Landscapes of Communism let any of their subs know fully what they were in for and what they d be giving up by entering the relationship It unrealistically imo never becomes a problem in the story but there s aack of informed consent in the relationship that s really problematic for me There s a huge difference between saying this is a relationship that uses domestic discipline and this is a relationship where you re going to give up all agency to me plus there will be domestic discipline Not that Mitch or Antonio ever use such formal or adult NORJAK language view spoilerGoing back to the characters histories I was also troubled by Ricky s and Danny s history of physical abuse in conjunction with a DD relationship Looking at Ricky specifically there was VERYittle transition between his abusive relationship and him entering into a relationship with Mitch Antonio and TJ one that he was specifically told would contain physical violence in the form of spanking An abusive history and becoming involved in DD or BDSM etc is not inherently bad or unhealthy but the ack of transition the way the group enfolds Ricky and the presentation of Ricky along with the other subs as very naive very juvenile very unworldlyit reads badly It s a similar story with Danny Danny is taken in to Mitch Antonio and TJ s home as a ward a dependent a iteral child and is The Outside looked at by Mitch and Antonio ateast as a child Part one of my issue with that is that as their ward Danny is given ABSOLUTELY no agency down to being physically grabbed carried back to the house and spanked when he tries to run away Though I don t necessarily Loving James (Surviving Elite High, love the relationship that Mitch and Antonio have with TJ and Ricky TJ and Ricky ARE adults they have the ability toeave the relationship to make decisions for themselves whereas Danny is held under restrictions and controls with zero recourse that are incredibly restrictive even for a teen much younger than Danny The other part of that is after regarding Danny as a child their child for than a year I m a Bedford Square (Charlotte Thomas Pitt, little creeped out by the idea of that relationship then becoming sexual There s also an issue for me in the fact that TJ RIcky and Danny for the most part don t enjoy being spanked Obviously something done for punishment shouldn t be per se enjoyable but it seems fairly clear that they see the spanking as necessary to have the relationship they want with the men theyove which again is kind of a turn off If I m going to read kink I want it to be kink where everyone s in and excited by it and that s not what this book gives me hide spoiler 35 starsI gotta admit when I first saw this book and read the blurb I thought UHHH just great 356 pages of mainly sexthat s to many pages for porn I I See Rude People like a story with porn not a porn with storydoes that make senseI was wrongAt first I was pleasantly surprised by theack of sex The story was mostly about how Danny came into the relationshipbut th. Ew Orleans Antonio was cultured well mannered and easygoing He also knew what it was HVAC Design Sourcebook like to face hardships discrimination andoss That gave him the ability to see both sides of any situation A natural nurturer he saw through Mitch's rough exterior and found a heart of gold Together they opened up their own gym and uickly turned it into one of the most successful fitness centers in Manhattan Mitch and Antonio were in a Melvin Menchers News Reporting and Writing loving relationship for five blissful years before deciding to increase the size of their family TJ Ricky and Danny complete the union They are an extension of Mitch’s and Antonio’sove and devotion TJ the oldest of the three was born blessed Good The Far Dawn (The Atlanteans, looking athletic and spoiled as a child he had everything his heart desired Until he spotted two hot men enjoying a vacation in his hometown in Florida he had neveronged for anything In his flirtatious teasing matter he sought them out and was determined to win them over Underneath all of TJ's ego and pretense Mitch and Antonio found a restless spirit seeking boundaries and a sense of purpose Ricky is the typical middle child of the group Unassuming and sweet he puts the needs of others before his own He is beautiful inside and out Musically gifted his
Between 4 and 45 starsThis is a very unusual menage story It is 5 men who are in a committed poly amorous relationship with This is Ormen i Essex like 35 but I rounded up First thing about this book is that it is a Domestic Discipline book with no kink play in fact there is actually veryittle sex in it There are alot of discipline spankings and none of them are use as sexual foreplay To me the spankings did fit well into the story and for the most part had a purpose but unless you are into that they can get a Bare It All (Love Undercover, little much At the same time I felt this book feel into the trap I see with alot of books that have DD in it They focus so much on the discipline part of the relationship that they forget to connect the characters with fun andoving emotional times outside of when the boy messes up It makes it hard for me to connect and care for the characters as much as I shouldThe other thing about this book that is a Bare It All (Love Undercover, little strange is that Danny is sixteen when he arrives into the group He also acts young for his age and not just in a brat way Sucking his thumb temper tantrums and the instance he isn t a kid A great deal of this book revolved around Danny and how he doesn t want to be treated as a kid yet still needs structure in hisife For me this kind of made the book awkward mixing parental disciple with the DD relationship TJ shares with Antonio and Mitch It also blurred the An Elusive Victorian lines and made it hard for me to connect Antonio and Mitch asovers instead of parents to Danny in the end When Ricky comes into the relationship it is heartbreaking to watch what it does to Danny but I almost wish the author didn t shoot for the HEA and instead gave up heartbreak to give this emotional impact On some A Bird in the House levels Iiked this story alot but it focused so very heavily on the DD that I really didn t feel the Staging Tourism love between these guy They didn t have thoseittle moments of affection or even some internal mussing over not the protective feeling or need to have a strong Daddy but what made these guys hot for each other I didn t mind the The Last Imaginary Place lack of sex but there needs to be something there to connect these guys emotionally beyond protective instincts and the need for structure 35 starsThe blurb really gives you the details of the story and I really did enjoy watching these five men try to navigate things As if five men together isn t enough of a challenge this is a Domestic Discipline relationship with Mitch and Antonio as the daddies It starts off in present time then flashes back to cover the year and a half from when TJ brings 16 and a half year old Danny home to Mitch and Antonio which includes Ricky joining their family I want to be clear that there are no sexual overtures or relationship with Danny when he was a minor other than some kissing between him and TJ when they first meet Danny has been on his own for over a year his mother was neglectful and there is some sort of abuse in his past He often acts immaturely and is clearly in need of discipline structure and counseling Everyone makes aot of mistakes in this book and often then not I found myself asking if the men really took the time to Not Just Roommates let Danny know what he was in for and have him clearly understand how the relationships in the house work Even at the end of the story when Danny is brought into the foursome I m still not sure he understands the dynamics and what is expected of both sides in the domestic discipline that is the basis of theirivesI did have some trouble getting used to the writing style and there were some things that I was told that I would have Cassidy Harte and the Comeback Kid (Outlaw Hartes, liked to see play out the book would definitely benefit from some editing but I am now invested in the relationship This is a first book in a continuing storyine so not everything is resolved and some things are just beginning I am really Jean-Paul Sartre looking forward to seeing how Danny responds to his new role and see if the other men especially Mitch can actually accept him as an eual adult partner going forward uick summary of Bringing Home DannyDanny gets spanked all the time When he s not getting spanked he s doing something that will bring on the spank Even after he gets spanked he gets spanked some just to drill it in I get it already It got to the point where I was ready to spank myself for purchasing this book When I saw this book and realized it was a MMMMM I snatched it up thinking I was in for a ride Five hot men in a bed Sign me up Problem was that the sexy times were ALL fade to black with the exception of one at the very endNeedless to say this one won t be sitting in my spank bank Pun intended I m not sure where to start with this book It failed for me on a number ofevels I picked it up because it theoretically revolves around a five way poly relationship and I wanted to see how the author handled the dynamics of that many people but the dynamics as presented wer. The heart of New York City beats Vintage Games like never before in the new series Five in a Bed It is a savory chronicle of five distinct men bonded in a polyamorous relationship involving sex discipline and above all elseove Their relationship is as uniue as each individual man but their need for acceptance and belonging is universal Meet Mitch and Antonio two strong passionate men who rule their household with a firm hand and a gentle smile Meet wild and hedonistic TJ sensitive and artistic Ricky and the pup of the Zamba litter Danny They desperately crave the mixture of a soft embrace and hard discipline only their toughoving Daddies can provide Five in a Bed is about the trials and tribulations of making a different type of family with its own special kind of The Erotic Motive in Literature love Antonio Mitch TJ Ricky and Danny may not represent your average household but they share the same honor commitment andoyalty essential for any The Detour loving home Mitch grew up in a family of rugged red necked men in upstate NY where being gay was not readily accepted But Mitch developed a hard edge and strong minded opinions of his own Topping 6’8” it was rare for him to find a man who could meet him eye to eye Then he met Antonio Aight skinned black man brought up in